Josh has a adventure

     Im room 5 we had to make a storyboard we had to have one true part and one  false part here is           mine .

persuasive writing about the great walk

I believe that people should stop building the Great Walk. Here are my reasons.

Firstly mountain bikers are raining over native plants and animals  because they can't see

the plants and animals because they are going too fast

Along the same lines  children that would be walking the track could rip out native plants and 
Chase native animals for fun. Also people would be dropping more rubbish along the track and
native animals Could mistake it for food and eat it then choke.

Secondly builders would start creating houses on places with steep Rocky Slopes and uneven
ground with week soil. In addition more people will take away the spacious and country like feel and
make blackball just like Greymouth. on the other hand is that there is construction sites on the roads
around black ball and punakaiki to block people from the track and for fixing pipes .

Lastly more Freedom campers  will be taking up parks up the track and around local towns 

Like black ball punakaiki and barrytown .

Also along the track will be poo over the track from Freedom camping

having to go to the toilet .

Next  more people having to get Freedom campers to leave because they are dangerous to the
environment.

In conclusion I believe it all be a bad idea because it is going to kill native plants 

And it will bring a lot more Freedom campers they could feed native animals that can kill them