1 March 2017

Starting School

IALA recounts

I have worked hard to add detail to my ideas.

My first day in room four was alright.

The playground was gigantic. There were two climbing walls. The playground laid beside the fence.

There was a building layer on one side. The buildings were made of wood and corrugated iron. They had a veranda on the side with a shelter and it was off the ground.

There was a court just outside the building.

3 comments:

  1. I really liked the descriptive words you used in your writing Wilem, well done!

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  2. Nice writing skills, good job! :)

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  3. What a cool piece of writing dude!

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