30 July 2019

Josh has a adventure

     Im room 5 we had to make a storyboard we had to have one true part and one  false part here is           mine .

8 comments:

  1. Hello Wilem, This is a bit tricky I have to think hard to find the false part of the storyboard. Cheers

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    1. miss B thank you for thank you giving me a helpful comment I will work on work making my work making easy to easy understand form wilem

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  2. nice wilwm i like your work but many next time you can add a bit more detal in it cheers

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  3. Hi wilem
    i like your storyboard you did a great job.but i think u could add a little bit more detail.
    cheers

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  4. Hi wilem.
    I like your storyboard it is so cool but next time you can add a bit more detail.

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  6. HI willem your storyborad is amzing but i think you could of put more detal in and your drawings are getting better.

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